Thursday, 28 May 2015

Ocean Diver

The boy is with his brothers friends near the ocean
the boy got dared to jump into the Water perfect from a plank he keeps trying and trying until he succeeds.


In position. I look down at the glistening water. My mind is telling me I can’t do this. What are you thinking? It’s just a dare. I look back at my brothers friends, they believe in me. So I start to put one leg out and the other. I get my arms in position looking at the sky tower. Just focus. Don’t look down.  I’m in the wrong position. I really need to prove that I’m like them. Like my Brother and his friends. I hesitate. Get into the right position nearly about to land
                  And then
                                 And then
I belly flop.

I jump out of the water hoping they didn't look,but they saw me’ “What was that?” Josh said. “That was a practice run This time I tried it again.” “Don’t belly flop this time,” Ethan teased. “ I promise it was a practice,” the boy said.

I look down. Hoping this time I succeed. “Just go,” one of the boys said. “I can’t,” I explained. I get into a diving position putting my feet together. I jump and concentrate.

I land. I proved that I’m SMOOTH and COOL
Everybody had their jaws wide open

Blue ocean | Blue ocean,


Tuesday, 19 May 2015

Foul shot

Foul shot

The ball is in my hands to shoot
the ball spins wobbles and getting into space for the rebounds And it's a GOAL the crowd goes wild

I’m getting into position
With 2:00 on the clock
Trying to avoid the other team
The ball gets passed to me
I look for space
The ball gets tossed
Other player not expecting the ball
Looked for space
Scrambled around the court
Throat tight
Thrown to the goal

The ball spins
Around the edge
Nearly about to fall out
The team getting into space
for rebounds

Looking for rebounds
Spun around goal
Waiting to fall out
It’s a GOAL!!!!!
The crowd goes wild

Monday, 11 May 2015

The Unknown soldier

To the unknown soldier👨😖

This is my blurb

The unknown soldier
In our inquiry we have learn't about all the tragic things that happened in war all the terror you had to go through so thank you for serving our country

As I write to you, I have some teardrops running down my eyes that are gonna be sent to your eyes. I wanted to write to you all about my thoughts about war. While I write to you, I am sitting in my cosy classroom with my teacher and my friends. I want you to know that you suffered for our country, And saved your loved ones and all the country. Today we remember you for all things you did in war.

How did you feel when all the dead bodies surrounded you? When you were fighting for our country to make it a better place. Lot’s of people thought war would be a holiday. Did you think like that?

I cannot imagine what it would be like carrying that heavy gun and having to say goodbye to your family also digging those trenches.I would rather stay at home being a conscientious objector but I wasn’t born in those days. Thank you for serving our country.

We have learn’t that soldiers came home with a sad soul after everything happened. The war changed everything in the soldiers lives because all the terror hit them. They just can’t get rid of all those memories.
I will never forget your memory.